Why are blossoms accompanied by thorns?

i'm sorry but the way you've made the poem look like, i mean literally, it kind of made me not want to read it. so i think you should may be change the length of the lines and also on 'i saw' ( makes it look monotonous). the content is ok. but thats what i thought and i might be wrong. after all these thing are subjective. anyways you have talent so work on it